Looks like its coming along quite nicely. The shark bit at the end is really funny. It looks like your main poses are pretty good, just seems like maybe the timing needs to be adjusted in a few spots, like towards the beginning when he leaps off the catwalk, seems like he drops a little too quickly to the ground or is paused too long in the air.
This is just awesome, Mike. There's always things that can be picked at but I think it's necessary to point out that this is an excellent piece. But now, let's pick at it. When the camera moves up for the first jump, it seems a little awkward. The the camera tilt up then down is a little fast. Then there's the last arm swing before he jumps to his doom. It's the left arm swinging back. It feels a little jarring to have the hand swing at the camera like that and it grabs my attention every time. Does he wink at the camera? That's awesome.
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Looks like its coming along quite nicely. The shark bit at the end is really funny. It looks like your main poses are pretty good, just seems like maybe the timing needs to be adjusted in a few spots, like towards the beginning when he leaps off the catwalk, seems like he drops a little too quickly to the ground or is paused too long in the air.
This is just awesome, Mike. There's always things that can be picked at but I think it's necessary to point out that this is an excellent piece.
But now, let's pick at it.
When the camera moves up for the first jump, it seems a little awkward. The the camera tilt up then down is a little fast. Then there's the last arm swing before he jumps to his doom. It's the left arm swinging back. It feels a little jarring to have the hand swing at the camera like that and it grabs my attention every time.
Does he wink at the camera? That's awesome.
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