back leg after the turn and before the climb onto the box needs to be tied down. reaction needs more anticipation. add more frames at the end for a settle.
It's coming along well. I do feel like the startled reaction is a bit too fast. If you add the anticipation and some settling frames in the end this piece will be much stronger. Maybe if the 'hand' moves before the creature's reaction it will give a better sense of what is about to happen because right now it seems to happen at the same time but that might be the fast timing. Good job on the reaction of the creature. The addition of using its weapon when it gets scared is clever.
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back leg after the turn and before the climb onto the box needs to be tied down. reaction needs more anticipation.
add more frames at the end for a settle.
It's coming along well. I do feel like the startled reaction is a bit too fast. If you add the anticipation and some settling frames in the end this piece will be much stronger. Maybe if the 'hand' moves before the creature's reaction it will give a better sense of what is about to happen because right now it seems to happen at the same time but that might be the fast timing. Good job on the reaction of the creature. The addition of using its weapon when it gets scared is clever.
-Merisia G.
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