Good pass! The movements and the situation are a lot more easier to read compared to last week. Something to watch out for is the right character's pelvis movement in the first half where she is kneeling; her hips are too static, so slight movement whenever she moves her torso would make it less so. Also watch the balance of the left character when she lifts her right leg when she takes a step back; I suggest putting a little more weight on her left leg, and when her foot touches the ground she could spread her weight evenly across both her legs again. Keep it up!
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Nice work!
Good pass! The movements and the situation are a lot more easier to read compared to last week. Something to watch out for is the right character's pelvis movement in the first half where she is kneeling; her hips are too static, so slight movement whenever she moves her torso would make it less so. Also watch the balance of the left character when she lifts her right leg when she takes a step back; I suggest putting a little more weight on her left leg, and when her foot touches the ground she could spread her weight evenly across both her legs again.
Keep it up!
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