Good blocking. The poses are working well, though I would loosen his spine up a bit. I know that ballet dancer often ends up with a straight spine, but there is allot of squash and stretch going on still. ad a bit more flow. You have strong poses, but I would watch the silhouette a bit. There is a pose on the 6 second marker where his silhouette is gone. finally pull the guy who jumps away further. This is a very promising piece.
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Good blocking. The poses are working well, though I would loosen his spine up a bit. I know that ballet dancer often ends up with a straight spine, but there is allot of squash and stretch going on still. ad a bit more flow. You have strong poses, but I would watch the silhouette a bit. There is a pose on the 6 second marker where his silhouette is gone. finally pull the guy who jumps away further. This is a very promising piece.
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