You have allot of things working in this. I like the staging (though I would rotate the camera around a bit just to see more of her face). The poses read, but I would work a bit on the silhouettes because you loose here hands a a bit in the end. Your animation is going along nicely. ad a bit more contrast and watch your spacing in some of your arcs I would say. Also tone down her animation in the beginning since you want the focus to be in the guy and not her.
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You have allot of things working in this. I like the staging (though I would rotate the camera around a bit just to see more of her face). The poses read, but I would work a bit on the silhouettes because you loose here hands a a bit in the end. Your animation is going along nicely. ad a bit more contrast and watch your spacing in some of your arcs I would say. Also tone down her animation in the beginning since you want the focus to be in the guy and not her.
Thank you. I will fix this follow your say, and will post new one someday not so far.
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