I really enjoyed this piece and its progression throughout the semester. Great job, Saloni!
Going forward, the biggest thing that stands out is her movement being too fast/big on the line "...time when". Also, I'd agree with Eric's note on the secondary character; she's moving, but not really reacting to the the dialog.
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I really enjoyed this piece and its progression throughout the semester. Great job, Saloni!
Going forward, the biggest thing that stands out is her movement being too fast/big on the line "...time when". Also, I'd agree with Eric's note on the secondary character; she's moving, but not really reacting to the the dialog.
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