So let me point out first that this is looking really good and that its going to be an amazing demo reel piece.
First Swing in th begining I think you can have a bit more contrast/ease out before he picks up speed (look at your second swing because that one is great) and when he gos up to prepar for the second swing a bit quick there as well (1 to 2 frames more should do it)
In the swing befor the jump as he go's up, again I think it maybe needs a fram or two for padding.
The dynamics of the spilt is good, but I think you can pull the legs further apart. Break the legs as well and not have them "tweened" all the time (the split is a good opertunety for this) For the 3 last swing when he gos up again, its a bit to quick, try adding a frame or two or play with the spacing.
The Spin as he is about to hit the ground has great flow, but you might want to again break the legs up a bit. make him a bit of balanced and have him come up a bit slower when he lands, its to perfect and dose not feel real if you know what I mean.
have a look at this (which I'm sure you have already)
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So let me point out first that this is looking really good and that its going to be an amazing demo reel piece.
First Swing in th begining I think you can have a bit more contrast/ease out before he picks up speed (look at your second swing because that one is great) and when he gos up to prepar for the second swing a bit quick there as well (1 to 2 frames more should do it)
In the swing befor the jump as he go's up, again I think it maybe needs a fram or two for padding.
The dynamics of the spilt is good, but I think you can pull the legs further apart. Break the legs as well and not have them "tweened" all the time (the split is a good opertunety for this) For the 3 last swing when he gos up again, its a bit to quick, try adding a frame or two or play with the spacing.
The Spin as he is about to hit the ground has great flow, but you might want to again break the legs up a bit. make him a bit of balanced and have him come up a bit slower when he lands, its to perfect and dose not feel real if you know what I mean.
have a look at this (which I'm sure you have already)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NI84deK5jDQ
video has vanished for this file - what's up with that?
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