I really like the story on this animation. The only thing I would suggest is maybe exaggerating the first leap of the girl when she gets off the steps and starts walking (adding a bigger movement to show the girl's energy). Also, the jumps between the obstacles are a bit stiff; I think adding head/torso overlapping action on each landing will make this piece even stronger. Good work!
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I really like the story on this animation. The only thing I would suggest is maybe exaggerating the first leap of the girl when she gets off the steps and starts walking (adding a bigger movement to show the girl's energy). Also, the jumps between the obstacles are a bit stiff; I think adding head/torso overlapping action on each landing will make this piece even stronger. Good work!
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