Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Sayoko Primitive Object


First video is with camera movement, second one without.  Same content, though.  Wondering about the timing; I feel it's too slow.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I like the movement of the camera. I think the timing is a bit slow on the second fall of the object as well as in the swing. If you speed those a little more, I feel like it will give it better movement. Also, maybe adding a slight hold before the object jumps forwards into the swing/twirl will give some anticipation for the leap. Great start, though!