Very good and funny! I don't have much to suggest changing apart from maybe moving around the character's root/hips a bit more while he is swinging the sword; at the moment he is a bit too static around his hips. Great work!
Staging looks good and key poses are there. However, your face doesn't really change overall. You could push the "nervousness" in the beginning of shot, and change to "excited" after the thought process. First, the brain figure out, and then the body moves. Be careful that the face usually would be the first one to react.
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cool sequence, blocking looks good, can't wait to see it when its finished
Nice staging and rule of thirds. Make sure you post a video for a full critique.
Very good and funny! I don't have much to suggest changing apart from maybe moving around the character's root/hips a bit more while he is swinging the sword; at the moment he is a bit too static around his hips. Great work!
Staging looks good and key poses are there. However, your face doesn't really change overall. You could push the "nervousness" in the beginning of shot, and change to "excited" after the thought process. First, the brain figure out, and then the body moves. Be careful that the face usually would be the first one to react.
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