Nice! There's big improvement here! Some of the actions seem a little jittery still though like the very last jump before the cut to the box and the jump apex over the box. But the change of spacing on the legs after the box jump is looking good. The final pose probably needs some kind of moving hold or settle animation. Good Job!
It still seems like you are easing into the fall on the jumps.he shouldn't be slowing down as he is landing, so check that out.
On the first jump, I find the right leg pop back distracting, Is this what someone would do when jumping with their 2 feet together?
For the third jump, i feel like he has this explosion of energy, try adding more anticipation before he jump so that this explosion makes sense. or tone it down. How would you build this momentum up? I feel like this much energy might be more sutited where he is jumping off the final box, Right now on that jump, he pauses, I don't feel like he would pause after such a large jump, he would carry that momentum into the next jump and carry on.
Over all, he seems to be leaning forward as he's jumping. Think about the jumps like a bouncing balll. There would be more movement in the upper body, with stretch and squash as he is taking off and landing.
as he is running at the 5-7 second mark, he is slowing down, I think he should be keeping a constant rate, or speeding up to build up to jumping.
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Nice! There's big improvement here! Some of the actions seem a little jittery still though like the very last jump before the cut to the box and the jump apex over the box. But the change of spacing on the legs after the box jump is looking good. The final pose probably needs some kind of moving hold or settle animation.
Good Job!
Hey Marisia, this is looking much better.
It still seems like you are easing into the fall on the jumps.he shouldn't be slowing down as he is landing, so check that out.
On the first jump, I find the right leg pop back distracting, Is this what someone would do when jumping with their 2 feet together?
For the third jump, i feel like he has this explosion of energy, try adding more anticipation before he jump so that this explosion makes sense. or tone it down. How would you build this momentum up? I feel like this much energy might be more sutited where he is jumping off the final box, Right now on that jump, he pauses, I don't feel like he would pause after such a large jump, he would carry that momentum into the next jump and carry on.
Over all, he seems to be leaning forward as he's jumping. Think about the jumps like a bouncing balll. There would be more movement in the upper body, with stretch and squash as he is taking off and landing.
as he is running at the 5-7 second mark, he is slowing down, I think he should be keeping a constant rate, or speeding up to build up to jumping.
Like Nick said, you have a great improvement.
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