I think you have some really nice explosions of energy coming out of your landing poses. nicely Done, Just some thoughts I had.
In the salute good by, I think you could give more time to that maybe show her saluting before she falls. So people can see it. I Think it's more of a distration while she's moving, and will cause the viewer too pay more attntion to that then other stuff you might want them to be looking at.
around F107 when she is frog like coming off the wall.. The timing on this seems pretty slow compared to how she comes into that jump. Even from that platform to the pole seems to slow.
The movement on the pole seems nice, but also maybe a bitt to slow.
On the final spin and jump to the group. Watch out for twining. Also everything seems to compress together, try starting with the legs, then torso then head. for some nice overlapping action.
Nice work going on here. I like the swings on the last pole, but if you speed up the swing around in the first pole, I think it will make the animation better. One thing I'd like to point out is that it seems as though the character stops on the landing on the wall (before she leaps to swing). The animation is very energetic and by speeding up the time between land and leap, it will flow from action to action with the same level of energy.
I feel like this piece would be even stronger if you were to add some facial expressions and close up of them, so we can see the arrogant attitude of this character in the beginning and at the end where she walks out.
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Hi Sayoko.
I think you have some really nice explosions of energy coming out of your landing poses. nicely Done, Just some thoughts I had.
In the salute good by, I think you could give more time to that maybe show her saluting before she falls. So people can see it. I Think it's more of a distration while she's moving, and will cause the viewer too pay more attntion to that then other stuff you might want them to be looking at.
around F107 when she is frog like coming off the wall.. The timing on this seems pretty slow compared to how she comes into that jump. Even from that platform to the pole seems to slow.
The movement on the pole seems nice, but also maybe a bitt to slow.
On the final spin and jump to the group. Watch out for twining. Also everything seems to compress together, try starting with the legs, then torso then head. for some nice overlapping action.
Nice work going on here. I like the swings on the last pole, but if you speed up the swing around in the first pole, I think it will make the animation better. One thing I'd like to point out is that it seems as though the character stops on the landing on the wall (before she leaps to swing). The animation is very energetic and by speeding up the time between land and leap, it will flow from action to action with the same level of energy.
I feel like this piece would be even stronger if you were to add some facial expressions and close up of them, so we can see the arrogant attitude of this character in the beginning and at the end where she walks out.
Good job!
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