Some of the poses of the cat could be cleaned and pushed. For example in frame 50, the torso of the cat and the head is not align. Besides, the jump is really slow.
Good breakdowns and staging! The only thing I would change here is the timing of the jump from the chair to the table; the cat was in the air for a bit too long (about 2 seconds), so I would suggest shortening the time of the jump to about half a second (roughly 12 frames, maybe less). Other than that, good work!
looking good. Not sure if its just me but the cat looks like its skating a bit when its walking on the table; match the leg movement/distance with the pace of the body.
Your Storytelling poses are good but it needs much more breakdown poses to make it physical. The other big thing that pops is that your jumps are extremely slow.
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Some of the poses of the cat could be cleaned and pushed. For example in frame 50, the torso of the cat and the head is not align. Besides, the jump is really slow.
Good breakdowns and staging! The only thing I would change here is the timing of the jump from the chair to the table; the cat was in the air for a bit too long (about 2 seconds), so I would suggest shortening the time of the jump to about half a second (roughly 12 frames, maybe less). Other than that, good work!
looking good. Not sure if its just me but the cat looks like its skating a bit when its walking on the table; match the leg movement/distance with the pace of the body.
Your Storytelling poses are good but it needs much more breakdown poses to make it physical. The other big thing that pops is that your jumps are extremely slow.
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