Hi there. Just wondering if the focus is on the dog because my first view on that shot is actually the car rather than the dog. Are you going to do any camera movement?
I didn't read the description first, so for a second there I thought your animation was of a sleeping dog, heh! As everyone else mentioned, the dog wasn't easily noticeable against the dark color of the road. Maybe instead you could use a normal grey lambert material color (like the car and the suitcases) for the assets so that the dog stands out more against the background elements?
It looks like the dog is somewhat competing with the car because it appears to be hiding away at the bottom left corner of the screen. I recommend using the rule of thirds where the dog is slightly away at the edge of the screen, but still makes staging looks asymmetrical. Also, make sure the car isn't tangent to the dog, or the viewer won't see the dog very well.
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Hi there. Just wondering if the focus is on the dog because my first view on that shot is actually the car rather than the dog. Are you going to do any camera movement?
I agree with Wilson. Didn't realize there's a dog at first. Maybe would be better when the dog animation comes in.
I actually didn't see the dog until I read the comment. I think you could tone down the road color and maybe change the dog's fur.
I didn't read the description first, so for a second there I thought your animation was of a sleeping dog, heh! As everyone else mentioned, the dog wasn't easily noticeable against the dark color of the road. Maybe instead you could use a normal grey lambert material color (like the car and the suitcases) for the assets so that the dog stands out more against the background elements?
It looks like the dog is somewhat competing with the car because it appears to be hiding away at the bottom left corner of the screen. I recommend using the rule of thirds where the dog is slightly away at the edge of the screen, but still makes staging looks asymmetrical. Also, make sure the car isn't tangent to the dog, or the viewer won't see the dog very well.
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