I don't have the reference for the dance in particular, so I'll do my best to give some critique. The timing seems a little slow at the beginning, so if you were going to just keep the keys you have already, I would speed up the spacing for this so its not so slow. Or if there is more to the dance in between those keys, add those breakdowns to add some nice interesting arcs, possible follow through, secondary action and such. This dance has some good opportunities to exaggerate some parts of the actual dance to make it more fun and readable. Also, think about your camera and how you want your audience to view this dance too!
I would say to definitely make sure the limbs arent passing through other parts of his body right away before you start adding any more keys, just to avoid future messes. A lof of these poses dont seem to be hitting the beats either so make sure that you are paying attention to the high points of the audio and really sharpening up your timing.
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I don't have the reference for the dance in particular, so I'll do my best to give some critique. The timing seems a little slow at the beginning, so if you were going to just keep the keys you have already, I would speed up the spacing for this so its not so slow. Or if there is more to the dance in between those keys, add those breakdowns to add some nice interesting arcs, possible follow through, secondary action and such. This dance has some good opportunities to exaggerate some parts of the actual dance to make it more fun and readable. Also, think about your camera and how you want your audience to view this dance too!
I would say to definitely make sure the limbs arent passing through other parts of his body right away before you start adding any more keys, just to avoid future messes. A lof of these poses dont seem to be hitting the beats either so make sure that you are paying attention to the high points of the audio and really sharpening up your timing.
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