I think your piece is coming along really nice, there is great timing going on, and I like the little pauses that you have through out.
There is a leg pop on is right front leg, probably you've seen.
I think you could give more time to where the robot guy settles. I think he is toooooo wobbly after he sits down, maybe tone that down a little bit. Then when he is actually settled, give him more time there before the other guy starts shooting at him. Maybe you could direct the eye over to the one. So that the viewer has time to see that the other thing is going to attack him. Right now, if you don't expect something to happen over there you miss the movement all together. :) This is looking good! I really want explosions though. COMMON!
Good job on this piece! I like the rocking you added to the creature, and the timing is working well. I also think there should be some settling time, maybe a moving hold, after the rocking that way we can have some time to see what is about to happen.
Like Alicia mentioned, I feel like some sort of explosion or firing could add some action to this piece. Overall, great job!
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Hey Nick,
My comments still apply!
:)
I think your piece is coming along really nice, there is great timing going on, and I like the little pauses that you have through out.
There is a leg pop on is right front leg, probably you've seen.
I think you could give more time to where the robot guy settles.
I think he is toooooo wobbly after he sits down, maybe tone that down a little bit. Then when he is actually settled, give him more time there before the other guy starts shooting at him.
Maybe you could direct the eye over to the one. So that the viewer has time to see that the other thing is going to attack him. Right now, if you don't expect something to happen over there you miss the movement all together.
:)
This is looking good! I really want explosions though. COMMON!
Good job on this piece! I like the rocking you added to the creature, and the timing is working well. I also think there should be some settling time, maybe a moving hold, after the rocking that way we can have some time to see what is about to happen.
Like Alicia mentioned, I feel like some sort of explosion or firing could add some action to this piece. Overall, great job!
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