The double hop after the sniff doesn't read as anything a fox would do. If he's getting ready to book it, the timing is too even. The jump is also too even and slow. I'd make the Ty curve favor the landing, so the highest point of the curve is closer to the landing than the takeoff.
I like the timing upto the sniff. The sniff could read a little better, it looks like he might be tapping the eggs with his snout
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Everything is reading besides the double hop at the end. I don't understand what that reads as.
The double hop after the sniff doesn't read as anything a fox would do. If he's getting ready to book it, the timing is too even. The jump is also too even and slow. I'd make the Ty curve favor the landing, so the highest point of the curve is closer to the landing than the takeoff.
I like the timing upto the sniff. The sniff could read a little better, it looks like he might be tapping the eggs with his snout
I think your timing and poses are looking good. :)
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