Ok; I don't know the story for this piece which gives me an advantage as a critiquer. It looks to me like the elephant is getting irate with maybe a handler off screen. Then he charges but slips on the spill in his cage. He then gets up embarrassed as elephants get.
The drag on the trunk is awesome when he first trashes his head to screen right. But when his head comes back screen left the trunk doesn't drag anymore.
I'm looking at the trunk, ears and eyes almost the whole time.
It looks like the front half of his body is in the air when he starts charging (the step before he slips). This might look fine if he reared up on his hind legs only before he charged but right now it just feels like he floats.
The fall feels AWESOME. The camera shake is great too; it's hard to look for any fleshy squashing that the rig can't provide since the camera is shaking AND it's feel like a huge impact.
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Holy shit. Can I say shit? Shit.
Ok; I don't know the story for this piece which gives me an advantage as a critiquer. It looks to me like the elephant is getting irate with maybe a handler off screen. Then he charges but slips on the spill in his cage. He then gets up embarrassed as elephants get.
The drag on the trunk is awesome when he first trashes his head to screen right. But when his head comes back screen left the trunk doesn't drag anymore.
I'm looking at the trunk, ears and eyes almost the whole time.
It looks like the front half of his body is in the air when he starts charging (the step before he slips). This might look fine if he reared up on his hind legs only before he charged but right now it just feels like he floats.
The fall feels AWESOME. The camera shake is great too; it's hard to look for any fleshy squashing that the rig can't provide since the camera is shaking AND it's feel like a huge impact.
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