i just want to know if you guys think this is good enough for a dance scene. I am still in the rough and haven't done the facial expressions for the girl. I'm trying to concentrate on the emotional aspect of the song but i'm just not sure if this is enough.
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I like the idea of infusing dancey moves into an everyday scene, but I think you need to push the dance aspect more for it to read well. I like the interaction where she is controlling his movements and pushing him so he turns, but since it is the only dance move it stands out awkwardly. If you put another move or 2 where there is good synchronization and push/pull between the two characters, it would hold the piece together.
thanks i was thinking that it needed a bit more movement too but i'd have to extend the piece or change the first part and just introduce them another way
Feels more like acting from a musical, maybe if you show those action while they're standing. That should work better
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