I'm back at working on this, and could use some fresh eyes. There's some obvious things that need to be fix (walk between 3-5 secs, facial expressions, for example), but any comments critique will help.
Hope everyone's having a good weekend. :)
PS: I should point out that I'm going to have a Morphy rig running. The scene will essentially be a running sequence. It will just be a quick run cycle on treadmill mode since I'm focusing on the creature animation more.
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It's saying the video is private and not showing it.
I popped an email over to her, hopefully that will get to her faster...
There are a few things I'm unclear about that would help me to give feedback.
I'd want to know a little about the story and creature's personality. Is it cunning or a mindless brute? Does it want to eat Morpheus? Does it just want to play with him?
Basically, based on the creatures movements so far, it's not clear what its intentions are. Those intentions will drastically change its movement :D
It's basically a chasing sequence. The creature (Tiny rig) is trying to catch Morphy.
Ok cool.
What I don't understand then is why the creature's movement is kind of stop and go. I would expect the creature to move a bit like a gorilla or a big cat. To me the movement feels almost like the creature is a bit clumsy.
In particular that comes from the way the creature lands when it gets to the ground floor and then stops to look at something before it continues.
Maybe I still don't know exactly what is planned to be happening.
I like the first few seconds where Tiny is pulling himself up on the rock, you get a sense of his weight. However, when he jumps to the next rock, I would change the landing placement. If he is a big heavy character, he would be coming down quicker. Maybe if you make tiny land moreso left on that first jump and then instead of running behind the rocks, he jumps down to the ground it would keep his sense of weight more consistent? I am picturing this guy as pretty huge though so maybe he would be more agile if he's closer to Morphy's scale. Also since we only have a few weeks left unless you have morphy keys that aren't here it might be easier to complete if you just keep it Tiny descending down these cliffs. Maybe there's food or something on the bottom or a dead Morphy to chew on.
Blocking is looking better, he's feels light just adding more weight would give him more power.
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