Saturday, October 26, 2013

Crystal Godat: Parkour WIP

I'm in the polishing stages right now But I thought it would be cool to get any additional feedback for my benefit :)


Parkour WIP from Crystal Dawn Godat on Vimeo.

4 comments:

Unknown said...

It looks awesome. I love how he struggles to pull himself up. I really think the whole thing looks great but at least for me the run looks a little off. I'm not sure what it is exactly. Maybe if you lean his body more forward it would help.

Crystal Dawn said...

Good catch Patrick! That's what Shawn pointed out too, so I'm actually been tweaking that today in the lab :)

Jessie Manuel said...

The jump looks a lot better! But when he first lands from the jump and looks around. I feel as if there isn't enough thinking / anticipation on the character's part. It goes straight from landing to looking around to running.

Crystal Dawn said...

I definitely agree with that. Thanks!