That change in the timing at the beginning is so much better! It gives off a convincing weight that follows through after the landing. Its kind of hard to tell on the very last bit, but I would make sure after he face plants, have the rest of the legs follow through settle, otherwise it looks kind of funny if the just stop mid air after a harsh landing like that. Also I do like the camera change in the last half too. :)
The timing in the 3rd jump feels like it hangs in the air a bit too long. I would check the graph editor and make sure the y-translation is more of a wider arc. Good job with your timing and animating the rope for the last jump!
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That was pretty good. I like the added pauses on the fire escapes. It reads well.
That change in the timing at the beginning is so much better! It gives off a convincing weight that follows through after the landing. Its kind of hard to tell on the very last bit, but I would make sure after he face plants, have the rest of the legs follow through settle, otherwise it looks kind of funny if the just stop mid air after a harsh landing like that. Also I do like the camera change in the last half too. :)
The timing in the 3rd jump feels like it hangs in the air a bit too long. I would check the graph editor and make sure the y-translation is more of a wider arc. Good job with your timing and animating the rope for the last jump!
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