Work on his face more. He needs more thought process (There needs to be a change of expression from "Examining" to "Thinking" OR "Remembering" (Like you had last week. I liked your previous version better (Where he looked away and thought about what he was smelling). Also, spline it soon so you can work on the timing better. Good work!
Really good! I feel the character's right arm should move a bit more than just resting on his knee. Maybe while he's checking the leaves, his right hand could be doing the same before he smells whatever he finds on his left hand.
First, I really like your setting of the shot. But I am a little confuse about the part that he tries to smell the truck. May be it is to fast for all those poses. Also, the change of emotion on the face is so quick and I do not get a chance to understand what happens?
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Work on his face more. He needs more thought process (There needs to be a change of expression from "Examining" to "Thinking" OR "Remembering" (Like you had last week. I liked your previous version better (Where he looked away and thought about what he was smelling). Also, spline it soon so you can work on the timing better. Good work!
I like the staging and also the animation put into the fingers. On the other hand I feel you could also push the face animations further.
Really good! I feel the character's right arm should move a bit more than just resting on his knee. Maybe while he's checking the leaves, his right hand could be doing the same before he smells whatever he finds on his left hand.
First, I really like your setting of the shot. But I am a little confuse about the part that he tries to smell the truck. May be it is to fast for all those poses. Also, the change of emotion on the face is so quick and I do not get a chance to understand what happens?
Hi, I love the idea that you have, maybe add some inbetween keys will be more better
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