This is really fun I really like your acting choices and audio. The only thing I think you could work on is the facial expressions maybe exaggerating a few in certain areas and just a little more facial movement overall. Really great job with this!
Great job on the animation! Maybe work a bit more on your lip sync in general, a lot of your mouth shapes don't match the audio, I think adding the right shapes will make your lip sync look smooth.
I'd like to see broader mouth shapes on some of the biggest vowels (AH, EE, OO) and +1 frame on any of the BMP moments (get into th at shape 1 frame sooner) for tighter definition on the lip sync. 'Complete" looks really loose
Tilt the head in Z axis more. The line of the spine into the head/neck too often feels stiff - break it up a bit more.
Smooth out path of action on hands, especially on 'We have submarine'
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This is really fun I really like your acting choices and audio. The only thing I think you could work on is the facial expressions maybe exaggerating a few in certain areas and just a little more facial movement overall. Really great job with this!
Great job on the animation! Maybe work a bit more on your lip sync in general, a lot of your mouth shapes don't match the audio, I think adding the right shapes will make your lip sync look smooth.
Great piece. it's a pretty smooth animation. I like your body movement, and I especially like your eye movement it's subtle and vivid.
Overall - this is working very nicely!
I'd like to see broader mouth shapes on some of the biggest vowels (AH, EE, OO) and +1 frame on any of the BMP moments (get into th at shape 1 frame sooner) for tighter definition on the lip sync. 'Complete" looks really loose
Tilt the head in Z axis more. The line of the spine into the head/neck too often feels stiff - break it up a bit more.
Smooth out path of action on hands, especially on 'We have submarine'
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