I really like the overall timing and posing on Mery, especially the part where she rolls on the floor. However, I think the last jump can be improved more by not having Mery stay airborne for too long, because right now she looks like she's floating in the air before landing.
I agree with Anita. There are some jumps where it looks like she is floating like, especially the jump up the wall and the last one over the gap. I would make some changes to the last landing pose as well, especially with her arms. I like the overall timing and posing of Mery throughout the piece. I think it's just a matter of timing now.
The section at the start needs to slow down by 2-3 frames on the second jump, and the last 2 jumps need to speed up by 2-3 frames. The recovery on the last jump is very simple and mechanical: try to finish off that bit.
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It's hard to tell from the angle, but I don't know if the translate z is consistent in the last jump forward. I think it needs more poses over all.
I really like the overall timing and posing on Mery, especially the part where she rolls on the floor. However, I think the last jump can be improved more by not having Mery stay airborne for too long, because right now she looks like she's floating in the air before landing.
I agree with Anita. There are some jumps where it looks like she is floating like, especially the jump up the wall and the last one over the gap. I would make some changes to the last landing pose as well, especially with her arms. I like the overall timing and posing of Mery throughout the piece. I think it's just a matter of timing now.
I feel like it's too slow when she prepare to jump up the wall. the anticipation could be more vivid and bouncing
The section at the start needs to slow down by 2-3 frames on the second jump, and the last 2 jumps need to speed up by 2-3 frames. The recovery on the last jump is very simple and mechanical: try to finish off that bit.
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