Looking great so far! I love your concept! Maybe try to position the camera a bit different in the first position, the angle seems a little off, but the rest of the camera positions are great. Another thing I would work on is the giant's pose after he throws the little dude, it looks like he is putting his finger in his mouth?
Oh... He was putting his finger in his mouth. The little guy cuts him with a sword and he was sucking on his finger because it hurt. I'm making some changes right now and that's one of the things I'm getting rid of. Thanks!
Hey man this is an awesome idea. I cant wait to see it when its done. Right now though I feel like its a little confusing to understand the shot as a whole because there are so many camera cuts. Maybe when the animation is finished it will be more clear.
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Looking great so far! I love your concept!
Maybe try to position the camera a bit different in the first position,
the angle seems a little off, but the rest of the camera positions are great.
Another thing I would work on is the giant's pose after he throws the little dude, it looks like he is putting his finger in his mouth?
Oh... He was putting his finger in his mouth. The little guy cuts him with a sword and he was sucking on his finger because it hurt. I'm making some changes right now and that's one of the things I'm getting rid of.
Thanks!
Hey man this is an awesome idea. I cant wait to see it when its done. Right now though I feel like its a little confusing to understand the shot as a whole because there are so many camera cuts. Maybe when the animation is finished it will be more clear.
Hey Mike,
I think I was a little confused by it too. I was just unhappy with it.
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