Nicely done! For the last frame I'd lift his leg up a bit, but overall nice flow. Everything seems to be moving without any hiccups except for a slight leg twitch around 0:02
It looks awesome. The only thing that feels off about it is the stiffness of the characters body. It feels a bit inorganic when he goes through the sequence. Certain frames show a difference in the placement of the character. Like the frames between 0:05 when he and the dancer lift their right leg and point downward, her knee comes almost all the way up to her chest giving here a solo framed left leg in a jackknife style stance and the guy's knee barely reaches past his belt. Then other scenes where she is contorting her body a bit more then the guy; this type of movement gives her dancing rhythm and leaves the guy a bit stagnant and stiff. Other than that, it looks really good.
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Nicely done! For the last frame I'd lift his leg up a bit, but overall nice flow. Everything seems to be moving without any hiccups except for a slight leg twitch around 0:02
It looks awesome. The only thing that feels off about it is the stiffness of the characters body. It feels a bit inorganic when he goes through the sequence. Certain frames show a difference in the placement of the character. Like the frames between 0:05 when he and the dancer lift their right leg and point downward, her knee comes almost all the way up to her chest giving here a solo framed left leg in a jackknife style stance and the guy's knee barely reaches past his belt. Then other scenes where she is contorting her body a bit more then the guy; this type of movement gives her dancing rhythm and leaves the guy a bit stagnant and stiff. Other than that, it looks really good.
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