Killed Him!

Here is my progress. What do you guys think? I plan on workin on the mouth shapes more.

this is my midterm. please leave comments. thanks.

Midterm pass not final

Lip sync needs work but hoping characters action read better than previous post. Feedback welcomed.

Midterm

Here's my midterm. Hopefully it should be ok. I was trying to turn in a fully rendered one, but parts of the head were missing and I don't know how to display them.

4th pass

so here is my work, i worked a lot on the man, not so much on the girl, so she looks kind of weird.
i'll have to submit this one today, but any feedback is still appreciated for further polishing. :)
thanks!

In Progress 5

So its close to tuseday and as much feedback as possible before would be loved

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In progress (still)

Here's what I've been working on.



I have to refine the second characters actions and make them snappier I think, and there's still drift and moving holds to deal with. Any suggestions, even though there's not that much time left until turn in time, are appreciated.

Lip Shapes

Here is the Layout for Lips Shapes as made famous by the great Preston Blair

linda's class blog

here's the blog from my lip syncing class.

http://linda-anim499lipsync3.blogspot.com/

small change for Lip sync

just changed the first shot a bit, dialed down body movement and added prop diploma, nothing huge, tell me your thoughts

blocking pass

This is my first post here. I welcome criticism.

2nd blocking pass

Here's my second blocking pass. Will add facial expressions next. Still need to add some anticipation and a few more breakdown poses. Let me know what you think so far.

2nd Passing

Here's my 2nd Passing. There are of course things I still have to work with such as: the chef's spine movements, the female's slide, the female's expressions (especially during the beginning), hand movements, and of course the movements, which is a little too fast.

third pass

hi guys,
here is my third pass, I added some ease-in and ease-out, and still need to put in some moving holds.
feedbacks are appreciated.
thanks :)

4th animation development

Hi Everybody

So I ahve started doing the lips movment (some of the lipe movment is there to tell me that the should be a shape there, but the mouth might not be as open as animated now) and gone into breakdowns and some tweens, but this is stil for the most part my extreems. I also have some eye darts and blinks in there as well. Going to now really get into the contrast in motions and, tweens, breakdowns and ofsetting, but before I do any coments? I'm also going to work more with their roots as well.

Always love feed back

E The Viking

Evan's Progress

So I've changed it so there is one camera, this way it focuses more on their acting then the joke at the end. (at first The last camera cut was going to reveal that the bird in the cage was dead)
At first I disliked losing the gag but now I'm kinda happy that there is more focus on the two characters. Also I couldn't find a bird rig.

Oh I also added a minute and a half of silence to have more time for his reaction.

All feedback is always appreciated. ^^
-Evan

First Time Blocking

Missed last weeks class so feel I'm a bit behind but here is my first pass at blocking my scene. Let me know what you think. Have not included all of the facial expressions just attempting to get the body working correctly.

Third Blocking Pass

So this is the version with all the new stuff in it.

Ill be adding breakdowns and inbetweens tomorrow. Tell me what you think.

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Here's my blocking. I added a bit of lipsynch in it as well. Please tell me what I can do to make it better. Any ideas and suggestions will be appreciated.

First Post

I checked, read, and viewed all the clips on this blog (well about a week ago, but didn't leave any comments). Anyways everyone's works has been looking good so far.

Here's my Academy Award Winning Acting video lol jk. Just my reference and lipsync (using jlipsync). These are not actually the final, since my movements are off and I don't have expressions of bother characters interacting. The camera would be over the shoulder of each character that is not talking.

Tovar_G_blocking

The Blocking for my animation. The sign only disappears because i haven't crafted its chop-able twin, and i'm not sure if there's a point to keying a circular saw's blade spinning in stepped. Let me know what you think.

Blocking_Version_02

So this is my new version Blocked out. I have take some of the suggestion in here and tried to fix the cameras now. Hope the timing looks better. can't wait for feedback.

So I did some blocking for my scene. I'm going to add more keys today. My new idea is there's a bird in the bird cage hopping around, and when it goes back to the last cut it's lying there dead. Does anyone know where I can find a bird rig? I haven't been able to find any free ones.
All feedback and criticism is welcome. =)

Oh I tried extending the time in which he reacts on the sound clip, but it sounded weird cutting to silence..

hi guys, here is my new blocking. not sure if it is going to the right direction.
i'm still trying to figure out the camera angle, so that i can show the cans, and maybe i'll get rid of the red button if it doesn't work.
comments are appreciated. thanks :)