Sorry to be so long posting back on this one: extra cookie points for your patience. The timing on the bounce forward is a bit odd - check your arc and timing with a simple primitive object (ask me to demo this in class today as this is a handy technique for animation challenges like this.)
These notes are based upon the more recent version handed in for midterm marking:
This staging is working better, but you can frame in a bit lower and tighter (almost brushing the top of the trainer's head and keeping their feet in the same position. Curl the torso of the kid forward when he's looking down to provide contrast when he looks back at the trainer. The kid's right hand going to his lap is drawing focus. Just have it slide down the benchand then go to the gesture at "athlete's foot". Keep on progressing, I'm looking forward to seeing this finished.
2 comments:
Sorry to be so long posting back on this one: extra cookie points for your patience. The timing on the bounce forward is a bit odd - check your arc and timing with a simple primitive object (ask me to demo this in class today as this is a handy technique for animation challenges like this.)
These notes are based upon the more recent version handed in for midterm marking:
This staging is working better, but you can frame in a bit lower and tighter (almost brushing the top of the trainer's head and keeping their feet in the same position. Curl the torso of the kid forward when he's looking down to provide contrast when he looks back at the trainer. The kid's right hand going to his lap is drawing focus. Just have it slide down the benchand then go to the gesture at "athlete's foot". Keep on progressing, I'm looking forward to seeing this finished.
Post a Comment