Here's my 2nd Passing. There are of course things I still have to work with such as: the chef's spine movements, the female's slide, the female's expressions (especially during the beginning), hand movements, and of course the movements, which is a little too fast.
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Camera and staging are working much better here, nice progress! Try not to have the female turn her face as far from camera as she does on "fail". I'd get the chef's hands clear of his face sooner before his line "that maybe you don't believe in me" and I'd loose the gesture toward her. You may want to have him use his left hand for the face gesture for better staging as well
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