Here's my midterm. Hopefully it should be ok. I was trying to turn in a fully rendered one, but parts of the head were missing and I don't know how to display them.
Good blocking work, try and push some of the key poses a bit bigger. Maybe have the wife lean into him a bit more in the torso on "I do believe in you". Needs to have a bit more time after the end for the joke to land - extend this out 48-60 frames. It feels rushed at the end. Some of the poses need some breakdown work to get a more organic quality to the movement. Head/torso relationship on both characters get a little stiff in places.
Show me the display issue you're having today in class and we'll see if it can be sorted out.
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Good blocking work, try and push some of the key poses a bit bigger. Maybe have the wife lean into him a bit more in the torso on "I do believe in you". Needs to have a bit more time after the end for the joke to land - extend this out 48-60 frames. It feels rushed at the end. Some of the poses need some breakdown work to get a more organic quality to the movement. Head/torso relationship on both characters get a little stiff in places.
Show me the display issue you're having today in class and we'll see if it can be sorted out.
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