Look for opportunities to go broader and more active with your acting choices on the screen left character (the guy at the piano). See if there's a way to frame so that you don't loose so much of his face, he turns too much away from camera, especially when he stands up.
The standing character seems too limited, the long holds need some small amount drift to keep him alive. He also needs some sort of reaction in the face to what the piano player is doing. His step away from the piano is very stiff through the torso and needs some more attention.
It feels like this is still a work in progress. Try shooting some reference acting out the line.
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Look for opportunities to go broader and more active with your acting choices on the screen left character (the guy at the piano). See if there's a way to frame so that you don't loose so much of his face, he turns too much away from camera, especially when he stands up.
The standing character seems too limited, the long holds need some small amount drift to keep him alive. He also needs some sort of reaction in the face to what the piano player is doing. His step away from the piano is very stiff through the torso and needs some more attention.
It feels like this is still a work in progress. Try shooting some reference acting out the line.
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