Great work! But I see kind of a bumpy animation just after the blue shirts guy say 'I feel bad'. Except that, your background set up, character choices and acting choices.. everything really goes well!
I like this scene a lot, and the character in blue shirt looks alive, if you move the camera up a little bit, the scene will looks better, and try to spend more time on the right character.
The portion where the character on the left leans over and shifts his weight onto the sitting character is great, the offset might be able to be tweaked by a frame or two but overall it conveys the shift of weight well.
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Great work! But I see kind of a bumpy animation just after the blue shirts guy say 'I feel bad'. Except that, your background set up, character choices and acting choices.. everything really goes well!
I like this scene a lot, and the character in blue shirt looks alive, if you move the camera up a little bit, the scene will looks better, and try to spend more time on the right character.
The portion where the character on the left leans over and shifts his weight onto the sitting character is great, the offset might be able to be tweaked by a frame or two but overall it conveys the shift of weight well.
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