(watching without audio) The head shift from right to left feels a bit too repetitive, mainly because of similar timing and movement.
Good job! I think maybe more eyes' animation will be better^_^
Good action! Good Facial expression! but a little bit poor work on the hand. It will be perfect if you fix it!
In my opinion about layout, I think your character is looking the camera too directly and it feels like there's no one. if your character is not talking to the audience directly, it would be better if the camera shows three quarter view.
Good Job~ But his eyes need blink that will be more nuture~~more humanly~~
It's a quick dialogue, I like the eye action of this scene, maybe try to working on the pose that match the pace of the audio.
I think the timing works well~ but the head probably needs more Rotate X (or Z? the head nodding one) instead just rotate left and right. keep going~
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(watching without audio) The head shift from right to left feels a bit too repetitive, mainly because of similar timing and movement.
Good job! I think maybe more eyes' animation will be better^_^
Good action! Good Facial expression! but a little bit poor work on the hand. It will be perfect if you fix it!
In my opinion about layout, I think your character is looking the camera too directly and it feels like there's no one. if your character is not talking to the audience directly, it would be better if the camera shows three quarter view.
Good Job~ But his eyes need blink that will be more nuture~~more humanly~~
It's a quick dialogue, I like the eye action of this scene, maybe try to working on the pose that match the pace of the audio.
I think the timing works well~ but the head probably needs more Rotate X (or Z? the head nodding one) instead just rotate left and right. keep going~
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