He's moving the cup too fast, if it were full of liquid it would start to splash out. Also the timing of the motions in the majority of the animation don't match the end (I, I, you know, work out). I like the speed and timing at the end, he looks more ashamed. During the rest of it he looks kind of angry at the other guy.
When he says "it's great, I'm not crying" he looks like he's doing the same motion, where his spine controls both bend down and "fold" his body. Also add some keepalive to the other character
I feel like his hands stick too much on the table. He probably will have some hand gestures in the air after saying "I'm not crying." The later part of your shot I think the timing is good if you plan it well, can be like cartoony style which have sudden accelerations and sudden holds. keep going~
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When Malcolm move his arm, I think he have to push back the arm more. Tone down torso control.
Timing looks good, and maybe you need to show more character's face.
It feels very pose to pose. Try to add more overlap.
The movements seem too glitchy. Having a nice overlap in the movements would help give a more natural jitter to him
He's moving the cup too fast, if it were full of liquid it would start to splash out. Also the timing of the motions in the majority of the animation don't match the end (I, I, you know, work out). I like the speed and timing at the end, he looks more ashamed. During the rest of it he looks kind of angry at the other guy.
When he says "it's great, I'm not crying" he looks like he's doing the same motion, where his spine controls both bend down and "fold" his body. Also add some keepalive to the other character
The poses feel very pasted and repeating exact movement in a linear manner.
I think you can add more facial animation~~ More movement for the fingers~~
I feel like his hands stick too much on the table. He probably will have some hand gestures in the air after saying "I'm not crying." The later part of your shot I think the timing is good if you plan it well, can be like cartoony style which have sudden accelerations and sudden holds. keep going~
Yes~~~
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